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    @Seef, What software is that? It doesn't seem to be mangastudio

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    Who's seef?

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    *head-desk*

    Just keep up the good work Rei.
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    Whoa. Bacon's avatar changed. Gah I didn't even know it was bacon til I read his name...

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    REI this is epic, can't wait for your to upload more <3

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    Quote Originally Posted by snowb400 View Post
    Who's seef?
    Thaaaaat's me. XD

    Quote Originally Posted by ram View Post
    @Seef, What software is that? It doesn't seem to be mangastudio
    It's Photoshop (all versions)


    Good stuff, Rei. I notice a great positive change in the paneling+ But I'm also noticing a lot of things "spelled out" that should instead be conveyed through images alone. For instance, "zoom in" on ch2 p8 could be conveyed in 3+ panels, where the image literally zooms in, perhaps with action lines. Also, "throw" on ch2 p11 is a little unnecessary, because the pose is already really expressive and the reader can tell what's going on without the words.

    Random question: how much have you experimented with background styles? I'm noticing on pages like ch2 p10 and other forest scenes that the trees seem to outweigh everything as far as visual interest and texture goes. Maybe you could consider adding detail to the cliffs? Also, remember that the darker a color is, the more it tends to pull an object to the foreground (this principle is called atmospheric perspective). I think it would benefit you to introduce maybe 1 or 2 more midtone greys into the comic to give the background elements different depths, because as it is, the dark grey of cliffs and the white of the trees is jarring to the eye, as the texture of the trees competes with the value of the cliffs for foreground attention.

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    I hope that our suggestion that you only update this when you had a whole chapter done didn't kill this! I realize it's possible you could be busy, but it'd be nice to know what is going on. : )
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    im hooked.

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