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    Fifty Fifty Member Evil_Cake's Avatar
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    cool 2 see some Tei action

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    Ho-shi7, this is different to when you first revealed the series. You've done some work! Hoho! Wow.

    You're a big Kishimoto fan, I'm assuming?

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    Very interesting. The story and characters intrigue me.

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    @ Seef: NO NO NO its ok. I have less of an idea than you do, so you're helping me!

    @renzo: It shows that much, huh... >_> I'm just a fan of his cloud style and the linear shading.. honest

    thank you to everyone else's comments!
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    Pac-Man-Tei.

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    Rei that roof on the tree house, is that pattern? or did you line them up one by one?

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    Difficult to say much here since you've been getting so much attention, but I have been keeping up with this, and it's definitely damn well earned, Sutari...

    If I had any critiques, it's probably that the backgrounds can be a little weaker than the rest of it. The mountains in particular really seemed to lack detail; And the perspective on P30 is just jaunting as hell. Perhaps it was supposed to be a "fisheye" sort of effect? Poxy probably should have been distorted more, if that was your intention...

    But anyway. Yeah. I really love the character designs and pacing. Keep up the good work. *_*

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    i suggest posting this on http://mytakoyaki.com

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    yes!! I can finally read sutari's manga.

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    Man this stuffs awsome. I love the character design; it has a 'Native American,' feel to it, which is cool. Though I would repeat what others have said, your backgrounds don't match up to the standards of your characters and sometimes theres too much open space with too few panels. But your nack for 'dramatic-moment-one-panel-pages' like Ch2, pge 3 is awsome.

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