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  1. 10-22-2011, 10:23 PM #21
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    CHAPTER 1 (pilot). I am amazed at how long it took to prep these.. and i keep finding mistakes in the flow of the story, but THEY GET BETTER, TRUST ME. OTL

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    -=CHAPTER END=-
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  2. 10-22-2011, 10:53 PM #22
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    -squeals- When does Poxy come into the story? o v o
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  3. 10-22-2011, 11:10 PM #23
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    Fking badass. Keep em coming Rei.
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    Awesome man! Keep it up .
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  5. 10-23-2011, 12:14 AM #25
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    if i was you, Sutari, i would make an epic battle scene follow in the next chapter
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  6. 10-23-2011, 10:06 AM #26
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    Oh yeah! (Has nothing constructive to add.)
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  7. 10-23-2011, 10:28 AM #27
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    I thought the time we come into adulthood is the time we....... well..... you know..... nevermind...

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  8. 10-23-2011, 11:07 PM #28
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  9. 10-23-2011, 11:59 PM #29
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    As freaking amazing as this is, was anybody else confused by the sudden appearance of a Narrator on page 22?
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  10. 10-24-2011, 08:59 AM #30
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    Sutari, there is no single person on this forum more inspirational to an inspiring artist than you.

    Also, yeah, the narrator on p.22 seemed a bit sudden.
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