anyone want to help me with some questions i guess that i can ask myself...to know if the manga storyline is good enough...is defined enough? or something,...help period XD

read what I have and tell me how can improve,how I can make the transitions from arcs/sagas,help make the arcs and plan out some stuff....

Its actual not that much....probably a 2 hour thing of reading replying and developing....so if your in plz do tell me and ill give you a link to my manga storyline(w.I.P)!!! '


BTW - I already copyrighted my storyline,so there's not gonna be any stealing