anyone want to help me with some questions i guess that i can ask know if the manga storyline is good defined enough? or something, period XD

read what I have and tell me how can improve,how I can make the transitions from arcs/sagas,help make the arcs and plan out some stuff....

Its actual not that much....probably a 2 hour thing of reading replying and if your in plz do tell me and ill give you a link to my manga storyline(w.I.P)!!! '

BTW - I already copyrighted my storyline,so there's not gonna be any stealing