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Thread: Jingshen's Drawings (Critiques Appreciated)

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    101 Dalmations Member Scarletlight's Avatar
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    Yeah technically speaking there all great. Good facial anatomy, good porportions and all that crap that you need. A good job on that. The style is even pretty attractive!
    ..But your right..you need variance. All your characters look very very similar. Many faces have the same shape, eyes and even hair looking through all your posts. Youv got all the key stuff down well but now youv got that, play with it abit. tweaking the rules a little helps with making different characters.

    Theres umm..a thing I saved somewhere that would be perfect for you..umm
    Got it!!
    http://jeinu.deviantart.com/art/Uniq...Pt-3-198515118
    There you go, that should help you out with variance.

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    Yeah, thanks for the link, it will come in handy
    Last edited by Jingshen; 08-15-2011 at 04:43 PM.

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    My Turn!

    You are VERY talented indeed! BUT (And I fail at this too in just my penciling) it could stand to be cleaner. I am very easily distracted, so extra lines tend to make me look everywhere, except at the figure itself. ^^;;

    And I also agree with Scarlet, they look like the same dude (*totally clicked the link so she can vary more too*).
    A Monochrome Rose,
    the last of her kind,
    Faded from red to a grey
    with the movement of time.

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    Wow. Its so nice.
    But yeah your hand is not that good. Please don't be offended.
    But that's fine to me because we're the same. I'm bad at drawing hands. xD
    Just practice. That's what I can tell.

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    Wow it has been about a month since I last put stuff here, whatever, I was busy with other stuff.

    Some random girl


    A guy that looks somewhat different from my usual ones


    I fix'd the WIP a little bit, but I really just stopped working on it altogether


    Hand practice, because I really need it

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    Nice stuff! I love it! You're a kind of person that can draw manga better than me.

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    ok tats nice work so far...
    i think guys helpe u a lot...but i want 2 say something too..
    even if u practiced making those fingers they are still the same....
    1>>> thickness of the fingers
    2>>> thumb size
    3>>> some look like banana shape
    4>>> better if u put nails 2 make it mor realistic...
    5>>> try making joints in each finger (each finger has 3 joints..)
    tats all
    try figure out those points...

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    you still got a lot to go when it comes to side view. head doesn't go slimmer in width when it's in side view. rather it becomes a little wider.
    the front view is the slimmest.

    also torso isn't wider on the part that's close to us. atleast it doesn't go that wide

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    Ooh, I don't think I've seen this thread before. I really, really like the way you do hair. I'd watch out for proportion, though. your legs have a tendency to get a little boxy and too long.

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    Okay thanks for the advice again. I am pretty bad at side view, mostly because I do not use it much. My hands still suck. Also I usually make legs kind of boxy because pants do not take on the shape of the leg usually, but it would not hurt to put in a few more folds. I will soon put up a sketch page of side views later so You guys can tell me what's wrong.

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