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Thread: Jingshen's Drawings (Critiques Appreciated)

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    Jingshen's Drawings (Critiques Appreciated)

    Although My artwork is pretty bad, I am posting here for help on how to make them better so...

    Please tell me how I can improve

    Sorry if my style is a bit different

    New wip with some improvements


    Some guy drawn badly


    An OC my little sister made up, she wanted me to draw him.


    Sketch page of faces


    Guy


    Girl


    Hands
    Last edited by Jingshen; 08-15-2011 at 04:52 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jingshen View Post
    Although My artwork is pretty bad, I am posting here for help on how to make them better so...
    Well, you've come to the right place XD. your over all anatomy isn't bad at all my friend. Of course There's a lot of room for improvement. the first thing I noticed is that you draw your mouths waaay too low. This makes them appear to have a small chin, or, no chin at all. keep studying the facial anatomy of your favorite style. secondly, although I saw some wrinkles, most of your clothes seem to be pretty flat looking and plain. Don't be afraid add some wrinkles and details.

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    OKay, thanks for the advice, actually I am a bit lazy to draw wrinkles which is why I don't, but I will try a bit more

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    The guy in the middle is drawn with his mouth up higher and more folds


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    I quite like it, tbh. The face is the guy in the middle is great, but the body is a bit less great. In terms of proportions you're doing pretty well and you did a good job on the wrinkles so far. I'm sure that those things will work out better with more pracise.

    About the middle guys left arm that's leaning on his leg, it's leaning too much inwards and the hand is oddly placed. Try doing that pose yourself and look in a mirror, you'll see how it works by yourself ^^ The other arm, the one sticking out has little volume. In this perspective, you need to make it more round, basically like a cilinder. We shouldn't be able to see much of his shoulder either, the arm is partially covering it.

    About the fingers, every finger makes the same twist, which makes it look weird especially for the upper ones. I doubt I can bend my fingers that way. You can be satisfied with the hand for now, I'd understand, but know it's not like it should be. I'd say take a mirror and compare with your own hand it's an easy way to look at the correct shape Good luck!

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    A distraction from my WIP

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    His right arm looks stockier than his left. Not bad otherwise. C:

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    pretty well done. Id advice you work on how you draw legs. Sometimes they look a bit rectangular. But it is just a sketch I guess.

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    hey. .ur face renderin is definitely not bad. . but your hand drawing is not very good. .but thats ok. . . it doesn't mean that you should stop drawin'. . .you just need to practice more. .Hey. .I think that you should study more on foreshortening and perspective. . and ur mouth drawing is not that bad. .I think that it resembles that of Katekyo Hitman Reborn's. . .I hope to see your future projects. .^^

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    Thanks for all the advice everyone!

    An OC my little sister made up, she wanted me to draw him.
    Please note that there was not a terrible amount of effort put into this, especially his left hand, but overall, I think it turned out well


    Sketch page of faces, please tell me how I can improve in this area. I just noticed that I used the same eyes for three guys, gotta work on more variety I guess. Look at all the eraser marks! OTL
    Last edited by Jingshen; 06-29-2011 at 04:20 AM.

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