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    thanks i will update when i finish this or maybe when i finish line art

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    It's got a lot of potential. I'm looking forward to seeing you tighten up the lines and add more detail. C:

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    That sketchy style... those inky lines! They're sooo Rembrandt!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hamachi View Post
    That sketchy style... those inky lines! They're sooo Rembrandt!
    I am not trying to be that sketchy intentionally, I just can't get my idea down any other way effectively

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    updated

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    Lookin good, dude. Very clean lines. Though I'd say the mouth is a bit small.

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    i think i like the rough sketch better... you shouldn't have removed the lines in the eyes and her accessory in the hair..

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    Quote Originally Posted by ramiel View Post
    i think i like the rough sketch better... you shouldn't have removed the lines in the eyes and her accessory in the hair..
    oh that stuff is still there i just hid them i will reupload it with it. also small mouths for the win going to take a while before the face is done though
    check page 1 for update
    Last edited by apples13; 06-27-2011 at 01:24 AM.

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    check first page for finished mami

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    The only issue I have with it is the torso (the way the form curves into its shape) is slightly (oh, god, ever so very slightly!) wide. That's just my layman's critique. Other than that, it's fantastic.

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