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    anything I need to fix in terms of color?

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    The colours look good so far but...is there gonna be any background? so far it just look like generic lighting which is good so far

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    no thats just there for now... i need to still fix some of her shading and stuff though

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    I think this looks lovely, nothing to fix here in my opinion.
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    The way you've rendered the hair is lovely, but I feel that, because it's so light coloured, the fleshtone on her face and hands is overpowering it. That's probably just personal taste though - it seems fine, really. I like the textured effect on her skirt.

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    perhaps we have different monitor colors?
    I did make the skin slightly lighter, but not like pale

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    i think the way you rendered hair is fantastic... it has lots of texture and nice lighting...
    might need to add some more shading to give the face and the rest of the body a little more contour and match the hair's level of coloring

    really nice arts
    she is very pleasing to the eye
    reminds of girls on magazines heheh

    u should draw more i wanna see more characters in ur style
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    i guess this is the final ?


    is this too simple?

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    This is very nice! I really like the texture of her skirt, and the matching hat and undershirt! I don't have any critiques right now, but I like that you keep posting and trying fix a single drawing before finishing! It's great for everyone to see the process

    Sorry I'm not too helpful this time :/ But I love the final image! And something people forget about critiquing, is that it's not always pointing out what's wrong--pointing out the things that work is part of a critique, too! But yeah, I personally don't see anything that stands out as off.
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    It maybe was just a monitor thing, I dunno. I like it with the darker blue in the background though, I think it makes the image much stronger.

    Just out of curiosity, did you paint the hair and skirt with watercolour?

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