1st picture.. .... you still got a lot to go when it side view... usually the face should be 1/4th of the head or something... (not sure it's just my observation and this is just me talking ) and the neck looks like misplaced.. >.<...
2nd picture..... she looks like she has a weapon in the knee cause it's so harp lol!... >.< (other viewers don't look at me as someone bad were already close friends)
3rd picture...... I'm not expert with chibi..(loli maybe but not chibi)
4th picture..... the normal width of a girl's hips should be the same with the shoulders..
5th picture.... lol that just made me burst out of laughter! I don't know what kind of comment i should say...
6th picture... very cool.. but still the hip
7th picture.... I'm not an expert in zombies....
nomobuyo hoshi hashtawa dogeda gumnicha de ribura!
so im still lacking in anatomy.. and profile...ok ill work on those >.< lol so on the females the shoulders are to wide right or r the hips to small or both..
the fifth picture... I wish i wont die in that kind of posing =_=
well probably the hips are too small... on my opinion atleast... people has their own way of drawing things.. so it still depends on you
Originally Posted by weez18
I'll say Weez yur not bad... not bad at all!
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Highschool of the dead fanart = proskills
Originally Posted by Ozzaharwood
ok im real proud of this one ((:
Last edited by weez18; 06-11-2011 at 12:26 AM.
First off... nothing personal for anything i say. I'll say it in advance. Sorry.
1st Pic: i love this one. it is a little pale though (it doesn't stand out)... darken some lines. The face could be worked on, you can learn side view anywhere, though.
2nd Pic: Good, (looks a little sloppy, lol) but the eyes are kinda far apart. The fingers on the hand also, where's the middle finger?
3rd Pic: The feet are kinda small, the eye burn doesn't go all the way down... the fist looks a little awkward. Could use some work.
4th Pic: Shading and the left hand... Great though!!!
5th Pic: Wait a second.. ... ... this is my request!!!! Okay then, i don't know how to judge it... it isn't really an original charecter, sry...
6th Pic: Wings need more detail, and shading needs more.... ... ... shading! Good Drawing
7th Pic: You seem to be good at zombies, i didn't find any flaws..
8th Pic: Good.. do you forget to shade? lol. Need to darken lines that weren't erased...
After criticizing your artwork (sry if your mad at me) i think that you are better than i originally thought. Great artist, Bravo!!!
in most my works i rarely to never shade in my work because i hate the way i do it lol
Originally Posted by BlueExorcist
as for #3 its a chibi so i thot i should make the feet really smal
n thx for the critique ^^..im not mad at all i expect ppl to b honest..but let me remind u ive only been drawing for about 4 months now (=