I'm a newbie, contrary to the fact I registered here in december. The thing is simple - tell me if what I've drawn is acceptable. The first time I received ruthless blow in critics on a certain forum, I almost quit drawing... but I figured I won't do much progress without knowing what should I practice, so I'm asking on an english speaking forum, for a change.

So here it is... I actually attempted to design a character for my story, and here's what came out. To be honest this is... my 5th character drawing so far

sketch (uncropped lol)
colored version