Reply With QuoteY'all so good mang ;_;
I really dig the armor and the post. Nice lines too- clean.
I think you should definitely color this, or have someone else do it :v
Y'all so good mang ;_;
Yet again......the handle is really ...........big.........
Oh and how i love the Girl-armors..........i bet they feel so .....protected xD Still a nice drawing cloudy, nice lines and your hips are more normal the usual. Maybe the feet are a bit short.
Problem?
Originally Posted by GunZet
Cloudy-Chan, I must appologize, I can't critique on your last pic, I love it too much, from the flower on the top, to the fact that such a small girl has such a big sword.... just perfect!
Actually the hips are about the same, it's the upper body I made more "normal". People just think I'm drawing hips bigger I'm actually usually just drawing the torso and ribcage very slim and narrow.
....or that. My bad.
latest drawing I did for the pimping thread.
Foreshortening is really hard x.x, redlines anyone?
I'm not going to be much help when it comes down to an actual critique but I really love her face and the way her hair is flowing
I like the pose on this one but I think it would look better with the hips slimmed down a bit. Here's a quick red line that I did for you. Hope it helps. Everything else looks pretty good.
Last edited by nisaren; 12-19-2011 at 08:14 AM.
oh thanks.. I like the wide curvy hips but maybe they could use a little slimming, probably not as much as you gave them though xD
thanks for the redline it gave me a bit of an idea ^^
Last edited by Cloudy; 12-19-2011 at 08:26 AM.
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