Fifty Fifty Member
i love ur style except for the freaky big hips
Teacup Ninja Tots
Super Senior Member
Ahhh, the RO art is so cute. :>
And blegh, I had a long comment typed out regarding the big hip debate, but my tab closed. DX DX I'll try again~
I don't think the hips are too terribly big. The thing that makes the hips distracting is actually the way you draw torsos. In a lot on images, the torso is just a flattish cylinder shape. A good example is this image. The rib cage stops very, very early in the torso, which makes the elongated abdominals unbelievable. The rib cage is also too narrow to have a different form from the abs, so in places like the back, it's hard to believe she has any sor of bone structure--the continuation of the ribs doesn't realistically transition into a location that could possible support the scapula. So basically all you hve to do is watch the anatomy of the ribs; make them a little wider and longer, and your hip "problem" will be solved.
But it's just an opinion.
Fox got it right; however, the legs should touch at the top.
(Am not biased towards anime one bit.)-Heart
All your last post's art is cute (didn't check the others yet)
I especially love the little dragon... wish I could buy a shirt with him on it!!!!!!!!!!!!
(feeling like one of those female fenatics in anime that get way too personal with the "oh so cute pikachew")
Pretty sweet guy Cloudy-chan. However, I can't stop thinking there is something with his eyes... maybe it's the lack of detail or something, but normally your eyes are alive and looking somewhere, with him, it seems like it's made of stone... dunno if that makes sence.....
And another minor thing is that your chest separation (the vertical one in the middle of his chest) is a little out of place. it suggest that he has two pectoral muscles on each side that unify at the end. I suggest just errasing that line.
keep up the awesome art!
999 Knights Member
The only thing i see wrong is the line between the tits. Cloudy.................you made it look like he has really small girl tits I think that it should be just one vertical line. Other than that pretty good
Originally Posted by GunZet
I have to agree with Gedeon on this. The between the "breats" shouldn't be there. Another critic could be the area underneath the arms (latissimus dorsi). It's possibly a bit too feminine/curvy
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