11-04-2012, 01:28 AM
Super Senior Member
Ahhh! I missed your art cloudy ;____;
Other than the torso being a bit of an odd shape in my opinion its great :O you're art work is always so awesome
11-04-2012, 03:18 PM
Not being specific is really unhelpful, if you're going to critique you should find out why it's an "Odd shape".
Originally Posted by Demonfyre
To elaborate one what Demon said, the torso is extremely long. There's only about a hands length between the bottom of the Rib-cage and the pelvis.
11-04-2012, 11:00 PM
11-06-2012, 01:18 AM
I'm just here to say that I love you cloudy and I've missed you and your art. T_T It looks really nice, I dont really have anything to add at the moment... sorry? o////o
11-27-2012, 11:10 PM
I'm an Adult! Member
hips!! eheh damn! y didnt i come across your art sooner .__. gl with the dolls
01-29-2013, 08:15 AM
Teacup Ninja Tots
01-29-2013, 11:01 AM
One Thousand Member
The things I noticed were(And I can be wrong):
Her rib cage - Where is it? D: The torso should come out a bit for the skin to properly come around it. The lack of the width required for the rib cage makes her look rather flat. The blue arrows are pointing at the areas. I'm not sure if this is a design preference though.
Her breasts - The far side doesn't show her clothing coming out away from the body, like the cleavage would imply. The clothing sets on her as if she were a paper doll. I've drawn a purple arrow pointing at a line that's keeping it 2D.
Also, the brooch(?) isn't in the middle. Don't know if that was on purpose.
Other than that, there's just a few little tiny nit picky things. I'm really diggin' the design. though.
Good to see you posting art again, Cloudy!
Originally Posted by Conversation
02-02-2013, 02:13 AM
02-02-2013, 02:24 AM
Oh man I love this style! (Especially the lips and eyes and shading and just aslkfj) I've missed you cloudy T_T
02-02-2013, 04:21 AM
Teacup Ninja Tots
Cora you are sweet as usual!! <3
ughh i forgot how to draw arms x.x
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