ramiel's art

[Matt]

Man, your stuff looks a LOT like Kentaro's.

Her tits look really nice on first glance, and even after Googling the proper placement, I can't put my finger on the error either. (If it helps, I didn't even see a mistake to begin with--and still don't).

Guess I'll just leave it to Nisaren or Seefy or Sutari.

[ram]

if it helps, this is the tops that I used.

SPOILER! :

but this girl doesn't that have a little bigger breast than the character I designed so I think it might be different.

[nisaren]

Did I hear my name? :X

Maybe it would help if you just peeked at some photo refs. Depending on the cut and tightness of the shirt you can show off breasts or hide them a bit. Here's a couple photos that may help you visualize what your lines should look like. I apologize for not having an exact replica of your pose or awesomely direct advice, but hopefully you can figure it out.

Some ref pics under the spoiler if you'd like to use them. I tried to stick with modestly endowed women. Sorry if some are really small (pics not boobs that is <.<).

SPOILER! :

In most of the pics there really aren't very many cloth folds around the breasts.

[ClockHand]

Take care of the hands and the length of the arms.

[ram]

thanks so much nisaren, I think I kinda know now what you mean with those refs.

and at clock, your right about that, I guess I wasn't focusing on the length of the hands.

at matt, thanks I really appreciate you saying that it looks like my one of my favorite artist's artwork, that really means a lot to me. though I guess I'm not yet there yet but I will be as good as that guy

[ckyume]

Liking her pose although you put much effort above her waist why not a little more to her feet? ^_^ and guy in perspective seems to lean back, I like.

[ram]

there we go, I'm kinda bored finallizing it so I'll just put the awesome details when I'm going to put them in my manga. >_>
the first chapter would likely her consist to wear these clothes, darn I'm already almost out of ideas just designing these clothes.
hope someone reply in fashion designing thread soon.

anyway, c&c

[Hamachi]

Was this done with reference or illustrated? I'm really impressed... O_o

[ram]

I probably did both, If you look into the reference I used you wouldn't be able to almost see the similarity though.

This is now a serious character designing that I will put into my manga and I don't want to be issued into art theft design in the future. >_>

[Gedeon]

I might be wrong but i get the impression that the legs are too long for the rest of the body, but since that isn't important here.....
I like the second one, and as for the third ne its kinda hard to make it out. So il wait for your finalized version(if you post any before your manga).