06-10-2012, 06:23 AM
fixed it, Thanks Delph... No need to be in "I'm no artist attitude"you seem to have a great eye on it.
Here I just fixed what you told me to.
Still having problems on the hood and skirt in this angle.
Last edited by ram; 06-10-2012 at 06:26 AM.
06-10-2012, 08:21 AM
I think the skirt is pretty much fine, one of my friends picked me up like this once when i was in a dress, and the way the skirt is seems pretty much the way my dress was in the photograph of it ^^
as for the hood, maybe have it draping over her right shoulder (closest to us) slightly? rather than just in the middle, just coz it looks like she's tilting towards us ever so slightly, so maybe that would help represent it a bit - plus if he's picked her up or caught her or whatever, there woulda been movement involved, so the hood wouldnt be 100% in the middle of her back
hope that helps, the pic is looking really good so far!
06-10-2012, 09:07 AM
Show me that pic of you being picked up!
Anyways, Yeah I figured just as much about the hood, I'm really having a bad headache today.
I'll just do this tomorrow. OTL
06-10-2012, 10:28 AM
Super Senior Member
Its starting to look really good now Ram all I noticed has been mentioned and you have fixed
06-10-2012, 05:53 PM
999 Knights Member
Although the Girls legs look a bit large.
Originally Posted by GunZet
06-10-2012, 08:33 PM
^yes maybe a little. Also, the underside of her left hip goes too much away from her body, makes it look like she got her ass down her legs xD At least that's my opinion...
But that's really the only flaw on that picture! I love your style, Ram =D You make awesome art.
06-10-2012, 09:38 PM
Oh! I knew there's something wrong with her ass! Damn elto your really an expert on Asses huh.
oh and about the legs, I really like girls with large legs.. so yeah that was intentional.
Last edited by ram; 06-10-2012 at 09:40 PM.
06-10-2012, 11:02 PM
06-11-2012, 02:19 AM
^ lol. asses are hard to draw though. especially since the shape changes depending on the gender :/
06-14-2012, 08:12 AM
I feel like I made the fire too strong.. does it look weird?