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    your composition is awesome*o*! i noticed in the second panel that the brunette's hips appear to have gotten wider, though.

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    As much as I hate your guts Ram I really think you're a very good artist.

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    That's not very nice Sylux

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    Thanks Cloudy but I was the first one who bully Sylux joking that I will hit on her sister so I don't deserve to be protected.

    @mereana, I'm probably not capable of editing that either way and I can get away with it if it's just a simple hip. but thanks for the crit.


    Here's an incomplete pic that you can crit.

    I noticed I got a big problem when it comes to drawing bigger one and small one so ima planning to rewrite the big one.

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    That girl sitting one the floor seems a bit uncomfortable, Especially the her right leg. Maybe its the way you align the shoe laces. hmmm..its just looking real funny for me.

    Aside from that, things are prettty tight!

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    Shoe laces huh... Ok I'll try to edit that.

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    actually, i copied her pose, and it's not that uncomfortable,i think it just appears that way because it;s such an unusual position.

    also, where are the dialogue bubbles going to go? stuff like that can make or break a page /8

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    Quote Originally Posted by WhenRabbitsAttack View Post
    actually, i copied her pose, and it's not that uncomfortable
    I actually did too.. man I look so lame on the mirror OTL

    I already calculated where the speech bubble would go, There would be some detail there that would be covered but it doesn't matter that much.

    I just hide the speech bubble so it can be critique properly.

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    One comment on the previous page (on the previous page): make the background less prominent > make the girl stand out more to the background. Especially in that panel with the tv in the background. It's distracting a bit (for me), you could try and make it a little bit lighter

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    I'll remember to edit that on my finishing touch, as for now I'll leave that there, thank's for the Crit

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