I can't believe a mortal like you was able to give advice to a perfect being like I am!
Yes I will consider your request human.
Also he's not a brunette, he has pure black hair but the light of the fire is reflecting on his hair.
Last edited by ram; 06-16-2012 at 06:29 AM.
ram, sometimes the gods must learn from their servants, as their trivial callings give a comparison to their own godly pursuits.
i can't belive i'm still playing along with ur perfect being thing -,-'
okay, but he appears to be a brunette beause of the aforementioned fire, so you can't blame me for assuming.
On page 1, is it supposed to be "the last 'pefect' being"? Or was that meant to say "perfect"?
so the 'perfect' being made a spelling mistake, did he?
hmm.....
.... err... no that was intentional, I did it to test you mortals! good work spotting it JJorgie.
I'm really liking the fiery background on page 1, but I would agree with WRA about the white background in that right hand panel. If you even filled it with black, you could just leave a white outline around the character to give it some contrast.
One other thing though; last panel, "if your the only one" should be "if you're the only one".
Thanks! darn it, maybe I should just make this into my original language >_>
Thank you, oh mighty one!Originally Posted by ram
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