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    Jake's Art Thread -- critplzkthnxbai





    Critique would be much appreciated!

    -Jake

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    Well, they're all very nice. ^^

    The first girl's arm seems a bit dislocated (?) and maybe a bit thin.

    Other than that, very nicely done!
    A Monochrome Rose,
    the last of her kind,
    Faded from red to a grey
    with the movement of time.

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    The shading looks great, Gandalf Brohame.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ladyannette View Post
    Well, they're all very nice. ^^

    The first girl's arm seems a bit dislocated (?) and maybe a bit thin.

    Other than that, very nicely done!
    I don't think you're right, the pose it's kinda forced but I think is good, the face is the only thing that bothers me, the top it's kinda flat...
    anyway you've got nice skills, watchout for the small heads and long bodies (2nd pic)
    do you have a tablet?
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    All of them are really good!
    But I found the 1st pic is a kinda weird....

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    Looking pretty decent. The first one has a really difficult pose and perspective to draw so very nice attempt. The second picture is definitely off proportion-wise, I'm not sure exactly what your construction process is when sketching these out. Do you sketch out a base stick figure to get proportions down? If not I'd suggest learning to do so. I like the last drawings, they all look like they have fairly accurate anatomy and the expressions are well done.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nerdonoff View Post
    I don't think you're right, the pose it's kinda forced but I think is good, the face is the only thing that bothers me, the top it's kinda flat...
    anyway you've got nice skills, watchout for the small heads and long bodies (2nd pic)
    do you have a tablet?
    Thanks! I still just got into manga... and drawing altogether, but these are some problems I should work on.
    And yeah I do have a tablet

    @everyone else: Thanks for the crit, I need it X_X

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