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Critique you want mmm? Give critique I will *nods*
Ahhhh, the force is strong within you mmm, BUT.
There is something troubling you yes?
On the first pic...wait I've already seen that, nvm lol.
On the second pic.
It looks good, you have a nice design. Yet there seem to be sharper parts surrounded by really smudgy blurry parts. Not to mention down below there is a super thick black outline.
I'd say try to do the whole piece like you did her face. It's sharp and crisp and not too blurry. Although around her hair area, some softening would have been nice, because the edges are a bit too sharp against the background.
On the third pic.
Really nice anatomy, nothing I picked up on first glance. And probably nothing I'll notice because I'm like..half blind or something. Maybe you could make this better by adding some texture to the ground: blades of grass, dirt spots, flowers, weeds, weed.
All those little things.
ACTUALLY, I did spot something anatomy-wise.
Her collar bones don't seem to align with her arms, instead they seem to be dislocated and floating off into space in the form of a slight shading.
And the hair imo, seems to be sitting on top of her head. *shrugs*
On the fourth pic.
I see you're trying to get into shading, but the black outline is holding you back. As I learned a few years ago, the outline thing can make or break your shading technique. It's possible to do it the right way and make it look awesome, but in this case they're battling each other for attention. So instead of looking at the sick shading, I'm looking at the outline of the character.
Maybe you should give this tutorial I made a glance, it could possibly help..but I'm not the best teacher.
Try checking this out.
On pic...I forgot what number I'm on and too lazy to scroll up this post.
Anyway, there is a lot going on in this one. But it's spread out all over the place...I can catch sort of what's going on.
Somebody is pretending to play real life WarHammer in the background, there's a castle on fire, a guy looking up a girls crotch, a girl holding on to the what seems to be the main character girl, two disembodied heads, and lightning?
But that's just a composition issue, if you can calm down what's happening there and just make it to the point, then it'll work better.
On the art itself, once again the black outlines are working against your shading, but you're putting work into the characters and that's good.
In conclusion, you are fine mmmm young padiwan, BUT.
You must practice! *inhales* I feel your power mmm
Originally Posted by doghateburger
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