The art is impressive. the bounty hunter looks cool. Only thing i can think of that's wring is the backgrounds, but I suck at those so i shouldn't complain.
I like your stuffs, but I kinda feel that you didn't put all your effort in this. The consistence in the anatomy, scenes and movements its pretty raw and it almost make it look like a storyboard.
I read you want to be more silly and surreal, but I believe you didn't prepare to much the concepts of the characters and places.