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    Regular Member Son44's Avatar
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    Son44's art - ... Female detective?

    Hopefully some of you'll give me some critic on my progress and things i should improve on.

    Personally i think i've improved a bit

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    Last edited by Son44; 02-28-2013 at 06:04 PM.

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    999 Knights Member jaidurn's Avatar
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    Woah man. You have really improved with your coloring! I see that all that practice has paid off. Good job man.

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    Dude you've improved lots :D Kudos

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    jaidurn: Yeah, I still have a long way to go XD

    Zizi: Thanks! Kudos

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    A fox girl i've been working on

    Edit: Why the heck won't the site change my images DX Oh well
    Last edited by Son44; 01-02-2011 at 04:16 PM.

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    Nice. I really like how the dress is, the folds are very well done. The gun's pretty awesome, too.

    Alas, I have no critiquing to do :P Just wanted to say it looks good! Do you plan on coloring and posting?

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    Blue_Dragon: Finished!

    This took me around 20+. Coloured in SAI

    Edit: Tweaked some colours

    Last edited by Son44; 01-03-2011 at 12:03 PM.

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    firstly wow thats so cool i like the girl she is really cool

    but i think the colouring dosent really blend in with the girl in my opinion
    also i think you should really try and add more on the background because its very vague but adding the bottles was a nice touch but again the colouring dosent really work with the girl or the girl dosent work with that background

    side note. i like your stuff but why dont you try and be abit of moe anime style colouring
    it probs wont work but try it

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    Regular Member Son44's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by axion View Post
    firstly wow thats so cool i like the girl she is really cool

    but i think the colouring dosent really blend in with the girl in my opinion
    also i think you should really try and add more on the background because its very vague but adding the bottles was a nice touch but again the colouring dosent really work with the girl or the girl dosent work with that background

    side note. i like your stuff but why dont you try and be abit of moe anime style colouring
    it probs wont work but try it
    Yeah i get your point. The colouring (before i put it through some editing) made the girl stand out more compared to the background. + yeah i need to work on bg details.
    Anyway thanks. ++ ill try some simple cellshading xD

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    I like your coloring, but I see that there could be some improvement made with your lighting. Like on the lady with the blue hair. She should have a golden tinge to her hair, and her tail is too bright. The shadows would be longer, and her tail should be darker, given the range of the shadows. Consider the saturation and position of your colors. Study where light falls....etc.

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