View Poll Results: Should I start working on inking or coloring?

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  • INKING

    4 16.67%
  • COLORING

    2 8.33%
  • BOTH

    15 62.50%
  • NEITHER. THEY BOTH SUCK D:

    3 12.50%
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    Ruler of the Seventh Empire GunZet's Avatar
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    Your coloring is pretty good, but the body shapes really offset it at times. I'd suggest picking up some anatomy practice and really stick with it for while. It's boring, but I guarantee it'll pay off and make your art look 10x better.
    Right now your anatomy isn't HORRID, it's pretty good, but I know you've been around here for a while. And I'd really like to see that massive improvement boost I know you're capable of O_o.
    So you know...like I tell everyone lol, keep at it, and make sure to double-triple-multi check everyting.

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    You have varying perspectives, and the neck is twisted like an owl's on the middle girl. I couldn't find problems with side girls.

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    Devilish Member Slurpee's Avatar
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    Thanks GunZet. I know I'm so close to another Artist Breakthrough! Just.. anatomy is so boring. I need to find a book on the basics, but something sort of intermediate and througough? Any suggestions?
    And Don't worry I fixed the neck too. Gotta fix those boobs too lol.
    consistency exercise~~
    Last edited by Slurpee; 09-20-2011 at 08:14 PM.

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    Devilish Member Slurpee's Avatar
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    I write too sometimes on the side.
    I'm such a creeper writing this stuff, lol
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    Devilish Member Slurpee's Avatar
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    Is that like a board game or something?

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    It's a roleplay. You make your own characters and keep track of hit points and such. Kinda like DnD or a RPG video game (only you do all the story writing, enemies, etc.) I used to do something similar (nerd.)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Slurpee View Post
    the side still looks wrong and so is the 3/4. LOOK CAREFULLY OF WHAT YOU POSTED AND WHAT YOU DRAW!
    also don't combine the hair and head, hair should be thicker than the actual bald head.

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    just a quick blue-line. Do things according to your own style. Mine isn't perfect.

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    Devilish Member Slurpee's Avatar
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    Thanks for pointing out the obvious mistakes. I'm going to buy a compact mirror to see them easier. Although it might be kinda wierd for a dude to carry one so... >_>
    On the bright side I sold this picture for six bucks. Succcckerrr.

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