View Poll Results: Should I start working on inking or coloring?

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  • INKING

    4 16.67%
  • COLORING

    2 8.33%
  • BOTH

    15 62.50%
  • NEITHER. THEY BOTH SUCK D:

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    Zeta Members ram's Avatar
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    =_= well you seem to ignore my advice about don't make the neck too far to the back.

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    Sorry, I am bad with digital editing, so I cannot redline, but I think I can tell you two ways on how to fix the picture. Frankly, the suggestions may be a bit too drastic for your tastes. You can try them or ignore them as you please.
    -The first suggestion has the assumption that the guy holding the girl is a chibi or child. If so, the fingers are too long compared to the hand. You would have to make them much stubbier, resulting in you having to redesign or omit the ring. The second suggestion for the same picture, which assumes he is older, would require you to elongate the proportions of the boy's torso and arm. If you were trying to show that the arm is foreshortened to justify that it is longer, it is still possible to do so without much erasing. However, with the earring portrayed in front of the arm, the arm doesn't appear to be reaching out as you would want.
    -Ramiel is also right with all three pictures; the neck juts out a bit too much.

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    the neck juts out a bit too much.
    im going 2 say its way too much and is super creepy looking.. fix this problem asap plz the pictures would be way better

  4. #44
    I was trying to be subtle about it, but yeah, fixing the neck would seriously improve the pic.

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    Sorry I have a really bad habit with necks. I'll fix it right away

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    Zeta Members ram's Avatar
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    yeah i seen your past post and you seem to do those necks correct somehow.
    =_= my guess is you ask help for reference too much.

    edit: sorry not all of those arts, maybe just one or two has the correct position of neck.
    Last edited by ram; 08-03-2011 at 08:41 PM.

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    Devilish Member Slurpee's Avatar
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    I ask for it because I spent a good hour trying to draw one hand >_>

    Today I will practice drawing necks
    More sketches for that guys halloween request

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    Zeta Members ram's Avatar
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    very nice slurpee.. i really like it.
    though you should take consideration of the connecting the body. your good at body and anatomy and head but your not that good at connecting them.

    i'm kinda busy with some other stuffs so sorry i can't make red line. so i'll just show you the correct head placement of where it should be placed.
    SPOILER! :

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    Although you gotta admit Rams its way better then the other pics.
    Problem?
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    Mmm, yes, considering he's Serbian, he might.... overwork the ladies. Don't need that.

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    Zeta Members ram's Avatar
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    yeah i really agree. that's the best art i seen you did so far. specially your adding background which i got bored trying to master though why is the background bottom view? shouldn't it be top view?

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