View Poll Results: Should I start working on inking or coloring?

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  • INKING

    4 16.67%
  • COLORING

    2 8.33%
  • BOTH

    15 62.50%
  • NEITHER. THEY BOTH SUCK D:

    3 12.50%
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  1. #151
    Devilish Member Slurpee's Avatar
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    Yup, i finally kicked my bad neck habit thanks to ramiel!

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    999 Knights Member jaidurn's Avatar
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    Way to kick that neck problem! One thing I see is that the foot pointing away from us is small.
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  3. #153
    Devilish Member Slurpee's Avatar
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    its been long

    Its been forever since ive drawn anything. Hell I only filled out ONE sketchbook this summer.
    Faail.
    But im trying to get back into my mojo.

    Licorice.
    No. 52 Elegant Vampire
    From MA's 100 theme challenge!

    Can you guess how many roses there are?

    IN the begging this was going to be like, a maid. But then it just turned into something else...
    I even thought up a little story of the picture.

    ~~Licorice, the wandering vampire who lusts after the blood of rich barons, posing as a maid to infiltrate their mansions....~~

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    Super Senior Member Demonfyre's Avatar
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    First of all; how many pages in one sketchbook? :P

    On her face I think you could make the side slope more, since it's a straight forward pose it just looks a little odd with the side almost vertical. I also think the lower left arm is a bit thin, other than that I think it's great!

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    Devilish Member Slurpee's Avatar
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    Around 30 pages. Not like actual full pictures but just sketches.. which is just so weird for me.

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    Devilish Member Slurpee's Avatar
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    Okay so the last time I posted in here was a year ago jesuz whoa.
    I should post pictures more often, I miss MT ;_ ;
    Good people, and only place to get a good critique.

    Okay, I want an honest critque of this pic
    http://v3rad.deviantart.com/art/A-Fa...Dark-430497568

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    The far eye is slightly taller than the one on the right. The far eye should be narrower, since it's at a 3/4 view. The mouth and nose are a little low and the nose should be slight moved to the left (so it's aligned with the chin). The wings just look like bags. Angel wings follow similiar anatomy to those of actual bird wings. Here's a link to a good wing walk-through: here

    On a positive note, she's very cute and has a good face shape
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  8. #158
    Devilish Member Slurpee's Avatar
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    I'm trying to correct this sketch before I ink it. Can I get some advice please, or maybe even a red line.
    And Yes I know her leg does this thing. I keep notes on a back page to know what to fix when I go back to a picture.
    Photo Apr 28, 3 30 01 PM.jpg

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