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    Three Trio Tres Member Rubisko's Avatar
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    ^This. Put some cool patterns arranged in simple shapes in the background and change the outline color of the title, maybe the pink on the dress of the angel would do?

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    @Bacon - Maybe I should stop doing that. I like critiques.

    @Gaff - To be honest, I know nothing--at all--about logo design or fonts or anything. I just know Comic Sans = bad and publishers like Times New Roman or Courier New. That said, I thought, after posting, that I hated the outline.

    @Rubisko - I hate it when you refer to a post above you just to find out that you're on the top of the next page. Anyway, I'll keep that in mind. I'd like to keep a dark fantasy aesthetic while kinda not making it too dark. After all, my entire premise for Siren Song is "brutal fantasy for all ages." I'm not sure how to balance pink with a bunch of darker colors and keep that theme at the same time.

    Playing with lineless coloring:
    Last edited by Matt; 06-29-2012 at 05:53 PM.

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    That's really cool! The cheek seems a bit too puffed out/round but otherwise, I love the colors and the style.

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    One Thousand Member Matt's Avatar
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    Noted. I thought the problem was that her head was too tall, but I suppose it's proportional. Stylistically, I just don't like it, considering how old the character is supposed to be.

    Oekaki stuff with Shipainter:

    Derpy angle, derpy coloring.


    Derpy head-body proportion.


    Derpy girl on the right.
    Last edited by Matt; 07-01-2012 at 07:23 AM.

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    those are great

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    y'know what i thought after reading your comments on those photos?

    derp,derp,derp .

    seriously though, they're good. i really like how you draw the hair

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    i like those two more realistic ones :3
    Practice mOAR perspective and foreshortening. The girl on or right in the last pic looks all kinds of wonky. Body-more specifically the arms proportions are bad. the face....is...i dunno...too low...not matching where the head is looking... the first and second really good. really like the first
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    One Thousand Member Matt's Avatar
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    @Cloudy - Thanks.
    @WRA - You have no idea how much I love long hair.
    @Ged - Practice will commence. I think that last one would have been better off if I'd completely redrawn the girl on the right.

    Well, guys, I think it's time I drew something new. Instead of fantasy girls for this post, I'll draw...

    ...a fantasy guy. Even my painting is sketchy. I'll formally finish something one of these days.

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    That hair. It's really well done. There are two flaws that I've noticed though. The first is his shirt. As baggy as it is in the shoulders, it shouldn't be that tight on his abs. The second thing is that the position of his right (our left) arm is just ... Off. It's sort to stumpy. All in all it's a really nice picture.
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    This looks great! Besides what BB said, I think the thumb of the sword wielding hand should be showing. Wonderful job!

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