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    Junior Member SassyTurtles's Avatar
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    Luxs' art. Lots of art.

    Alrighty.



    My friend's character, I was asked to give it a more anime-ish style. :I



    Trying lineless/perspective/light source all in one. @_@



    I drew this as a response to all of the Robin fanart showing up on the Oekaki. C:

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    Hey, some nice lines. I personally find the face to be a bit long, but it seems like that's your style. The only issue I have is your (over)use of the soft brushes. Using soft brushes just makes everything look muddled and no features stand out. Try working with brushes with sharp edges, I think it'll make your pieces stand out a whole lot more.

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    Thanks for the critique, man. I understand where you're coming from. C: More watercolor tool I guess~

    Here's an art trade I did, and I'm kind of proud of it.

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    Double posting D:

    GB doodle that ended up being more of a doodle.


    Commision for a friend c:


    Another GB doodle :/


    Some blushing meme thing i did. they got worse and worse as i progressed ;A;


    Random drawing of a doll. the camera flash ruined most of it though. DDD:


    Female Scout (from TF2). This time i used an actual ref >_>


    And a request from my mom's teamspeak/call of duty buddies. ;w;


    I really would love critique/tips on anatomy and stuff. D:

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    Interesting really! I like the style of these drawings! Made me smile in a positive matter ofc! ^^

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    oh hi fiat... we met in the group board before so you must have remember me! if you don't i'll kill you! (just kidding! PEACE!)

    first i would like to know who that arsenic poison? is he/she a spam? or is it just you?

    second for the critique..
    you misunderstood the way how the circle is used for the head.. (if your using a circle that is)

    Quote Originally Posted by Fiat_Lux View Post
    in tutorials you would always hear
    first draw a cirlce then put a shape of face on the bottom of the circle
    but that doesn't mean that you should use the exact size of the face of the drawing of the person of whoever the person teaching you.. =_= ofcourse it still depends on the person your drawing..
    hatsune miku doesn't have that type of face shape

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    Miko is kinda cool!

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    haha oh man this is a hella necro but here's some pretty recent art (spoiler'd for huge)

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    a dude

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    deerdude

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    hetalia fanart because i'm still a huge weeb at heart

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    an art project i did sophmore year. it's still pretty rad imo

    so yeah crit is needed thank u
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    Oooo this looks awesome! You've clearly improved since your posts from ages ago, which is always awesome to see

    Is there anything in particular you want to focus on? Just because that will make it easier for people to critique. For now I really like the shading in the top picture, shading isn't something i'm fond of normally but I think it works here. The deer does seem off balance, his center of balance is off so it kind of looks like he should be falling over. That's an easy fix though. I don't see anything else major that's standing out... I'm really excited to see what else you make because these are awesome! Love the style of the third one btw.

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    haha thanks!! uvu

    i really kind of want to focus on like, anatomy and composition? i've been told i have a pretty good grasp of colour (i need to post some of my colour drawings) so i don't think i want to worry about that so

    and i get what you mean about the deerdude and his center of balance, that was something i didn't even notice haha

    edit: i redrew the chick with the suspenders - took me about 30 minutes?

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