The pose seems to be a little off. With her center of gravity it seems as if she'd fall to our left her right. It also seems to me that her head is a little too big for her body, but this may just be a style preference for myself. I'm not sure if you do this already, but try flipping the picture horizontally to see if things still look correct. Usually any balance problems jump out when I do this.
I also agree that she needs to be made more feminine. Her hips to shoulder ratio is less than 1:1 which is what you want at the very least for female characters.
Some Madness from the Groupboard
I'm still working on that one (if I ever get the motivation to touch it again, heh). In the meantime, random sketch from the Groupboard. This probably never would've crossed my mind if I hadn't been listening to Cype and watching Sho, who was drawing elves. :P
Chat records are as follows:
(Guest7347) need interesting pose
(Hamachi) aw man
(Hamachi) I'm bored
(Sho) what kinda pose
(Hamachi) something with lots of action?
(Guest7347) I've gone through so many poses that every time I draw one, I'm like "...I did this already"
(Hamachi) Shooting a bow... with your feet!
(Hamachi) while doing a handstand
(Hamachi) balancing on a branch
(Hamachi) AGH I'm bored
(Hamachi) Artist's block impending
Max has signed in
(Hamachi) is it even physically possible to shoot a bow with your feet?
(Sho) with practice.
(Sho) I guess
Since neither of them drew it I took it on myself to do the job :/
Last edited by Hamachi; 06-16-2011 at 06:39 PM.
lmao this made my day..awesome drawing
Your Friendly Ban Hammer-er
lol You should finish it and make it into one of those motivational (or loser because you can't do it?) posters or something. xD
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Oh wow. That's the awesomest thing I've seen today (granted, it's not even noon where I live). I love that creativity. I should get on Groupboard more. If there's any fast way to give art block the boot, it's that.
I also think it should be a motivational poster (or demotivational). I'd put it on my desktop, for sure.
OHMIGAWSH the archery prophecies have come true. SHE'S THE CHOSEN ONE
Originally Posted by erikamae
This is far more impressive than that leg over the sholder junk and quite close to what you have there.