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Thread: Jaidurn's art - Taking Requests!

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    youve improved alot :)

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    999 Knights Member jaidurn's Avatar
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    Penguin: Thanks!

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    Oz's request from the old forum:


    Kodos' Request WIP. Would love crits.

    Bigger version:
    http://i494.photobucket.com/albums/rr310/jaidurn_charre/forkodossketch.jpg

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    999 Knights Member jaidurn's Avatar
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    So I did some anatomy practice.


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    Teen Member axion's Avatar
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    im sorry i cant comment properly cause i kept laughing at the face :L

    anyway id suggest you try a different method of approach when doing the anatomy
    look at a muscle dude i guess and make basic shapes of the body parts to keep a solid form

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    One Thousand Member Matt's Avatar
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    Your understanding of the male body is quite good, and I'm liking Kodos's request already. Maybe, though, you could broaden your male characters' shoulders. Just a suggestion. They look just a little off as they are.

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    999 Knights Member jaidurn's Avatar
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    Axion: Thanks man. I've been changing my style so your advice helped.

    Matt: Is this better?

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    So here is a WIP of mine. I will be finishing it and coloring it.

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    I really like how the last picture is looking so far. I definitely find it much easier to work with large masses and then just refine it over the course of a few sketches. I think for this person I'd take a bit of the hump off his neck because at that angle you most likely would not see his neck at all.

    I also like how Kodos' WIP is coming along. I can't really see the picture too well to really give any feedback but it looks decent. You've definitely improved since I posted here a few months ago.

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    One Thousand Member Regantor's Avatar
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    Hey man. Generally I think your anatomy is quite good; It's just the scaling that's a bit off at times. Making the arms bigger and the chest smaller in that kamina image definately would have solved alot of the problems. Might help if you start imagining the lower abdomen as a seperate "object" to the chest.

    Also, Kodos' request? The bodies are damn nice. The only critiques I can really give is that their shoulders are much too broad, and that Hevisa's face looks like it needs rotating to the left a couple of degress, and probally a pointier chin.

    Either way, keep up the good work, man. :u

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    999 Knights Member jaidurn's Avatar
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    Nisaren: Thanks man. I tried fixing it in this version. Did I do it ok?

    Reg: Thanks man. :U I have been trying to see the lower abdomen as a seperate shape.

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    Senior Member nisaren's Avatar
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    Yeah, I think that looks a bit better. The only thing now with the colored version is the hair looks like it's melding with the chest tatoos. Keep going though, it's looking good.

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