well considering u have been working on the first 40 pages for the past, what, 5 years? 6? u should probably reboot it so it will be fresher and more current with ur skills and tastes proper
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Yea man, just reboot it, give it a fresh breath of air. Nobody will forget the old pages cause they're awesome.
.................................................. ......................."Mind-controlling you into thinking this is awesome."
Yeah, you guys are right, the first pages really are getting old, and rebooting would give fresh air to the series. I'll probably only remake ACT 1 and maybe make an epilogue or whatever its called. I need to specify a few things about the link between Pumpkin Boy, Dink and Shiny. :0 Dink seems to just appears out of nowhere while she used to have her home there with Ultimomma, Pumpkin Boy, Shiny, and a few other gifted Orphans, that would make much more sense :0 And fixing the cover again, it looks a tad bit crappy now. XD Well, thank you Sylux and Gunzet, if you guys have suggestions to fix im open to ideas!
Errh New page
:-O I guess I should get started on the reboot of the first chapter and prologue..Or wait the end of Act 3, I just don't know when to do it ._.
Oh and I must say I still go full traditionnal exept for the tones(Gray) and the text. The rest is all old school.
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I saw this one page and i ended up reading the whole thing.
Funny story you have made.
Hey Aragorl, thank you for reading the whole thing, that makes me quite happy. And it's a great thing you enjoyed it
Of course, in a case of actual publishing ill have to fix up alot of pages lawl.
Here's the last page.
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Really like that third panel in particular, it's cute as heck. :3
As for re-doing stuff... The layout and pacing and stuff was already pretty good, it's just kinda the image quality and lack of toning/backgrounds that lets you down. I would just say be careful not to loose the flavor, more than anything.
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