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    Jozobad Saves the World

    Title: Jozobad Saves the World

    Synopsis: In a preapocalyptic hellscape, Jozobad must kill Jesus before the world is blown to pieces. If he fails, he'll never get to wear the shoes of his dreams. Oh and everybody will die I guess.
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    I am remaking this comic -> http://evilcakecomics.com/comics/JSTW/1/2/

    Only have six pages done so far but here is a peek : \




















    comments and crits r cool

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    Lord of Death jubeh's Avatar
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    The first text bubble doesn't really work because it just looks like you wrote over the same word like it was a mistake. Inking is cool but your lines are scratchy.

    No pompadour 0/10

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    Eh, I think the scratchy lines are only super noticeable in the overhead scene of the supermarket IMO. Overall it seems to fit pretty well. But yeah. That first bubble does looks kinda mistakey. The inking is mucho better. The expressions are where it's at, as always, too. ⊙▽⊙

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    thx for crits. I'll change that first speech bubble >_< was a stupid thought halfway through while drawing panel.

    as for scratchiness, I am trying 2 make the art extra shitty

    No pompadour 0/10
    man its just backwards

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    Lord of Death jubeh's Avatar
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    backwards pompadour so I guess -10/10

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    backwards pompadour is the new style man its fresh

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    Cannot unsee Super Mario in Mr. Miller. Great setup though; I think you had me at "shoes made of bomb shelters".

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