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    Iccy's Art Thread. GroupBoard request...

    My art after 3 months of not drawing anything D:!

    This is actually for a contest for a MMO game call Cosmic break, first place gets 2000....in game money >3<



    Wish me luck :C

    Do critique and comment plz C:
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    Good luck.

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    This is awesome... =^.^= I'm sure you'll do just fine

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    Hmm, this is kinda hard to crit, curse you. O<

    I only have a few suggestions for the blue girl -- although most of the things I mention will most likely just be stylistic preferences.

    - shoulders seem slightly too large
    - hand appears to be rather small (it's smaller than her shoulder)
    - lower leg is somewhat long and therefore gets too narrow in the middle

    Great job on the boobs though, and the red girl looks amazing. x]
    Good to have you back, man.

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    Lookin' good thar, iccy. I have some critiques, though:

    - Red's facial features are off-center.
    - Her chest sticks out too far, compared to where her neck would be.
    - The blush tone on her stomach is in a perfect oval, which makes it look somewhat unnatural.
    - It gets a little crowded nearby Red's far leg, so it's kinda hard to tell what's going on there.

    - Blue's far shoulder is way too far back. She would have at least a shoulderspan of 3 heads. You might wanna bring it closer.
    - Her near shoulder is quite large and raised a little high.
    - Personally, I'm a fan of long lower legs so I'm okay with that.
    - Does her knee have a kneepad on it? (can't tell cuz of costume) If not, it's too raised.

    Aside from that, this is a solid entry and makes a great wallpaper.

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    To Hamdrank, thx mate C:

    To Dark Deception, thx man! ^^

    To tay, I agree with the legs and the tiny hands, I notice that as well when i was colouring it Cx. I'll keep that in mind for future reference C: thx!

    To Cyp, Thx mate! I keep an eye on those for the future, maybe next time i sould have post it here on MT before getting to the final product, haha.

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    It's a little cramped, Red's left arm is getting lost in the BG.

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    True that Sparky my man.

    New stuff, an over due request from DA


    Yeah...this one have a ton of errors in it >_>;

    Its kinda one of those things that force you to get back into it, but even so, you fail horribly at it

    D:

    Do tell me if the colour are to dark for this one, because from my experience, the display on my laptop makes everything goes lighter :/

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    i really like the first one.
    if you don't win the contest, make some shirts of it or something else....don't let it go to waste.

    for the second pic, i really dig the j-lo type behine ;-)

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    xD I'll try to make some shirts mate! thx C:

    Ok, serious update...well, an update that i seriously need critique on xD

    MANGA PAGES! Dx

    This is not an original story, its my friends, I'm just remaking it for practice since I'm idea block atm.
    I need critiques on the paneling in particular. And yes, I havent insert any context. And this comic pages are supposedly to lead to my new art C:






    I know the pages are off sided, Ill fix that C:


    Check the original here:
    http://frost7.deviantart.com/art/PDA...25194635&qo=66
    http://frost7.deviantart.com/art/PDA...25194635&qo=67

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