Iccy's Art Thread. GroupBoard request...

[doghateburger]

My art after 3 months of not drawing anything D:!

This is actually for a contest for a MMO game call Cosmic break, first place gets 2000....in game money >3<



Wish me luck :C

Do critique and comment plz C:

[Hamdrank]

Good luck.

[Dark_Deception]

This is awesome... =^.^= I'm sure you'll do just fine

[indescribable]

Hmm, this is kinda hard to crit, curse you. O<

I only have a few suggestions for the blue girl -- although most of the things I mention will most likely just be stylistic preferences.

- shoulders seem slightly too large
- hand appears to be rather small (it's smaller than her shoulder)
- lower leg is somewhat long and therefore gets too narrow in the middle

Great job on the boobs though, and the red girl looks amazing. x]
Good to have you back, man.

[CypressDahlia]

Lookin' good thar, iccy. I have some critiques, though:

- Red's facial features are off-center.
- Her chest sticks out too far, compared to where her neck would be.
- The blush tone on her stomach is in a perfect oval, which makes it look somewhat unnatural.
- It gets a little crowded nearby Red's far leg, so it's kinda hard to tell what's going on there.

- Blue's far shoulder is way too far back. She would have at least a shoulderspan of 3 heads. You might wanna bring it closer.
- Her near shoulder is quite large and raised a little high.
- Personally, I'm a fan of long lower legs so I'm okay with that.
- Does her knee have a kneepad on it? (can't tell cuz of costume) If not, it's too raised.

Aside from that, this is a solid entry and makes a great wallpaper.

[doghateburger]

To Hamdrank, thx mate C:

To Dark Deception, thx man! ^^

To tay, I agree with the legs and the tiny hands, I notice that as well when i was colouring it Cx. I'll keep that in mind for future reference C: thx!

To Cyp, Thx mate! I keep an eye on those for the future, maybe next time i sould have post it here on MT before getting to the final product, haha.

[Sparky-J]

It's a little cramped, Red's left arm is getting lost in the BG.

[doghateburger]

True that Sparky my man.

New stuff, an over due request from DA


Yeah...this one have a ton of errors in it >_>;

Its kinda one of those things that force you to get back into it, but even so, you fail horribly at it

D:

Do tell me if the colour are to dark for this one, because from my experience, the display on my laptop makes everything goes lighter :/

[doruks]

i really like the first one.
if you don't win the contest, make some shirts of it or something else....don't let it go to waste.

for the second pic, i really dig the j-lo type behine ;-)

[doghateburger]

xD I'll try to make some shirts mate! thx C:

Ok, serious update...well, an update that i seriously need critique on xD

MANGA PAGES! Dx

This is not an original story, its my friends, I'm just remaking it for practice since I'm idea block atm.
I need critiques on the paneling in particular. And yes, I havent insert any context. And this comic pages are supposedly to lead to my new art C:






I know the pages are off sided, Ill fix that C:


Check the original here:
http://frost7.deviantart.com/art/PDA...25194635&qo=66
http://frost7.deviantart.com/art/PDA...25194635&qo=67