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    One Thousand Member Regantor's Avatar
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    The goings on certainly live up to the comic's name... Keep at it, Nyarlfella. Feels like we are really getting somewhere now. :3

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    Close...very close. But first, dialogue!

    This page took me a long time because of RPM 2011 takin' all my free time and stomping on it.

    SPOILER! :
    Last edited by Nyarlathotep; 03-30-2011 at 01:45 PM.

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    I really like the last 3 panels art

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    Sooo coool!!!! I love the way you work with perspectives! And that you put so many frames in one page that actualy look good and well organised!
    Problem?
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    Mmm, yes, considering he's Serbian, he might.... overwork the ladies. Don't need that.

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    Thanks for the comments, guys =)

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    Yeah, pannels two and six look really nice in perticular. :3

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    Thanks, Reg! Perspective is hard >_>

    New page:

    SPOILER! :


    Pretty happy with the lineart on this one.
    Last edited by Nyarlathotep; 03-30-2011 at 01:44 PM.

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    woah i missed a few pages at the end of chapter 2

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    Yeah, I think those were all the actual plot I had in Chapter 2, so ... somewhat important :P

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    Eh, usually it's not too bad, but I found the character's heads and necks a little too big on that last page in perticular. Other than that, the pacing and dialogue is still really quite good, through. Reg is waiting on seeing who the intruder is. ;I

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