Sinister - Chapter 4 pg 20-21 Oct 8th

[Evil_Cake]

is there a way to see it bigger?

[Nyarlathotep]

Well, if you click on the picture it'll take you to the drunkduck site, where it's at it's actual 1500xsomething resolution.

[Regantor]

Hum. Swore I replied to that last page.

Anyway. The double page split is a little confusing to me, to be honest. I can sort of gather that he's just punching the door at the same time as the enemy exploded because of the backgrounds, with with so much going on in between, it blurs the "cause and effect" a little... If you were really arsed about going back an fixing it, the best thing I could suggest is to just have him knocking right through the door all in the first panel; That way that specific action is over and done with...

Reg is still periodically keeping an eye on this, anyway, Nyarlaguy. Keep at it, dude. :o

[Nyarlathotep]

Thanks, Reg!

I agree that the cause of the explosion is a bit too 'inferred'... another fix I thought about was adding a panel of the dog actually exploding - couldn't really find a good place to put it, though, so I punted :P

[Bacon_Barbarian]

I think that taking 2 weeks is perfeclty explainable. It's probably your best page yet. And it's not like you're working on this 24/7.

[Nyarlathotep]

Thanks, Bacon - I appreciate the feedback =)

[Bacon_Barbarian]

I'm not sure calling it your best page yet can be considered feedback ... lol >.>

[Nyarlathotep]

Meh, close enough :P

New page:

[CypressDahlia]

Cool page. Nice silhouette effect. Though the scar on the chick's neck doesn't make much sense. If it's going from her jawline to her neck, then it should kind of dip in under her chin and thus further into the image, so it wouldn't be lined up with the portion that's on her cheek. It would probably be more toward the front of the neck.

[Nyarlathotep]

Thanks, Cyp! Good advice -I see what you mean.