Reply With QuoteRUN!!! OAO THEY ARE TRYING TO PUT ON A FIRE...............................right?
Yes, but hopefully yours doesn't planning on taking over your body. That would be troublesome...
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RUN!!! OAO THEY ARE TRYING TO PUT ON A FIRE...............................right?
Problem?
Originally Posted by GunZet
Maybe they just wanted to share some delicious Capri Sun?
Regardless, new page.
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Last edited by Nyarlathotep; 05-16-2011 at 02:26 AM.
OK. I'm just a little confused. Good quality though, you're getting more consistent.
just like to say im not confused
Hm.. one out of two isn't bad, right? :P Anything you're lost on specifically, BB? I may be able to explain it or try and clarify it in a later page -- any feedback on how I'm telling the story / explaining things would be helpful.
I thought the voice was talking to Grey. Exclusively.
Yeah, that's correct. I guess there hasn't really been enough confirmation to completely demonstrate that yet, but yeah, it's just a voice in Gray's head.
Gwerk. If Aysu's neck was smaller on the last page's fourth pannel, the foreshortening would have been perfect... The front of the neck just needed moving further back, really...
Anyway. Other than that tiny splooge, it's pretty good. Reg was another bloke who wasn't confused. :p
Latest pages lookin sick, dude. I like the more prevalent screentones, really brings out the imagery.
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