Sinister - Chapter 4 pg 20-21 Oct 8th

[Nyarlathotep]

@Sylux: Well, technically, everyone dies.

@Reg: Thanks!

@Rebel: Thanks for the feedback! Hand-drawing speech bubbles isn't a bad idea, so I think I'll give that a shot... my handwriting is far too poor for me to write in the dialogue though :P

Agreed on the poses thing - it's something I'm always working to improve.

Thanks for the comments guys!

[Sylux]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

[Nyarlathotep]

Two months later, and here we are... well, better than never updating I guess :P

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[Regantor]

Damn, hell of a way to make a comeback, Nyarl!

The pages definitely meet their goal of being as grizzly as smeg...

If I had to offer some immediate critique, through, it would be that there are one or two things wrong with her face. Lines to separate her ears from the rest of the head would go a long way to stop things from looking so flat, and her top row of teeth look like they are facing too far upwards. It could be the lighting, but she looks like she might be missing an eyebrow aswell.

Other than that, the hair is looking great, and the wolves/blood pretty damn visceral. The impact is definitely there, and that's much harder to achieve than some might think...

Now all that's left is me wondering if you actually are going to kill her off so soon. >_>

[Nyarlathotep]

Thanks Reg! Great feedback - thanks for the specificity.

She does appear to be missing an eyebrow... somewhat worryingly, I can't tell either. I already fixed this page once before posting here (the knife was stainless -- continuity error!) so I'm not sure if it's worth re-uploading for or not... :P

[Nyarlathotep]

Hnngh, another two months. Well, at least I'm still drawing, i guess.

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Thanks for reading, all!

[Regantor]

Wow, that's a hell of a bottom frame...

Hard to say much else since it's moving pretty slowly, but that's definitely one of the best things I've seen from you so far, Nyarl... >_>

[Nyarlathotep]

Wow, that's a hell of a bottom frame...

Hard to say much else since it's moving pretty slowly, but that's definitely one of the best things I've seen from you so far, Nyarl... >_>

Thanks Reg! Agreed on the slow. Hopefully I can pick it up a little bit; these last two pages took abnormally long - lot of tricky stuff I guess.

[Nyarlathotep]

Tried drawing two pages at once this time. Apparently it didn't actually increase my average page-production time, but given the dumb hours I've been working recently, it definitely increased my throughput.

Here we are:

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Comments appreciated!

[Evil_Cake]

2 pages what a treat