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    Saith. ~*~Warning, contains Nudity, Blue Pen, A Trap and Cee Lo Green.~*~

    So Boy Howdy, where do I begin.
    Well, I mean, I'm gonna post stuff that isn't amazing and stuff, because otherwise you wouldn't need to critique and that would be boring (also I don't have anything that is amazing and stuff, but shhhhh.

    Brace yourselves, there'll be quite a bit.

    Oh yeah, and sorry about the blue pen, smudges and other crappy stuff. They were done during a Chemistry double.

    Alrighty, sooooo.


    Hand Help!
    Quick!
    No really. Ignoring its crappiness, is the whole 'sort of realistic hand coming straight at you' thing a bit jarring, compared to the rest of it?

    http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...oo-d380rft.jpg
    It's weird how I still get sort of embarrassed about nudity. Like, I'm not cringing from the crappy anatomy or anything, but boooooobs. D :
    Oh yeah, how's the anatomy? Like, I know it's a dumb (very broad) question, but seriously. How is it?


    Um... Is the tattoo on her chest that I drew t cover up the fact that messed up her cleavage convincing at all? Also hair and eye tips, pleeeeaaase.





    Four sort of emotion thingies. Basically, are they different enough to tell apart? And do the different emotions look like the same people? I had another guy (a Kurt Cobain lookalike), but he just kept getting more Chinese as I drew different faces, until his 'sad' face looked Zhang Fei. Not his angry face though... *Shrug*


    The trap. Okay, so, does he look male enough to be a guy, but female enough to be mistaken for one. Assuming it's clear enough to, you know, see well. I couldn't do boobs, because hey, not putting a willy on the internets (yet).


    The Dresden Dolls. I'm, like, 5 years too late, but whatever. I am now obsessed.
    Anywho, ignore the ugly frog woman ( ;.; ). Or don't. I only really need general critique on these. I don't hold any illusions that it's any good, but the reason it isn't is more of a general 'I need to do better'. So anything specific I need to really work on, will be great.



    Basically, I actually kinda sort of did an okay job at shading it (in my opinion, of course), so, um, yeah, how is it? Just need sort of general critique on this one.


    Oh and Cee Lo Green. This is my most recent 'finished' thingie (a month ago), so basically, how do my newer (ie everything else was done today) things measure up? I don't have a tablet anymore (because it's a dick) and there's no way I can do more realistic things with a mouse, so um.
    Last edited by Saith; 01-25-2011 at 04:33 PM.

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