toasts art: fresh from the toaster. c+c plz *NEW:* color halp, plus doodles

[toast]

hey guys =D

if you've never seen my art, go ahead and look at my da: http://greensubmarine.deviantart.com

anyway, ok here's a recent drawing I did (it's kinda huge soo I'll put it in a link. sry):

http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...ne-d37t5ve.png

and i posted this one already, but as always, i didn't get criticism on it. (which annoys me guys. even if the style isn't one you're use to, doesn't mean you can't criticize it. it's not that hard.)

[GunZet]

Welcome to the other side Toasteh! It's...it's not so green yet but it's getting there lol.

Now bout that art, I think I remember this one from a while ago but never commented on it >_>
I have a feeling it has something to do with your obsession over that mp3 you got xD I love this one and that blue tint the girl has...and the firehawk.
Gots any new stuff? cuz I'm waiting!

[Renzokuken]

Welcome to the DARK SIDE!!! -insert dramatic music and sinister laughter-


This is awesome!! But you already knew that.

[Yara]

goggy is on the dark side too.. What is the dark side guys? =S

Regarding toast's art, there is some resemblance to picasso's style imo =)

[Rio]

Her head doesn't look symmetrical. Love the colors and very avant-garde looking artwork, btw. What were you trying to accomplish on the left, beside the tree? Also, I feel like the base of the tree should be wider. Right now, the top looks wider than the bottom and it just looks odd to me.

[PWhit]

Trippy stuff man! I like it, but I don't know if the distortion of the anatomy (the picture on MT) is intentional or not. Paranoid is good, but I would change how the eyes are to add more a realistic effect to the art and really make her look like she's going insane.

[GunZet]

Are you talking about that last pic?....I don't think Toast did that.

[PWhit]

No, Paranoid was from following his link to his deviantart.

[GunZet]

Toast is a girl bro xD but while I'm at it, I didn't see that link.
And now that I see it, I really like the colors, the orange hair really fits with the skin color. Although I agree the eyes could've been a bit more uniform or whatever I mean...looks epic either way.

[jessica_owl]

awesomeness love the hair and the skin....i can't really find anything wrong?