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    One Thousand Member JJJorgie's Avatar
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    Very cute!! But the arms look incredibly long.
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    I'm an Adult! Member alcoro's Avatar
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    @jorgie I thought so too..but couldnt get her arms to reach the ground x(( lol

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    They do look a bit long, but it may just be an illusion or our eyes are mismatching proportions.

    This may be due to the fact that her shoulders are in a very steep slump which can make them seem longer than they are, because they seem pretty proportionate to me. OR they could be contrasting with her legs, which would be a bit short if she stood up, compared to her arms. Either way, dig the style, you seem to try a lot of new things.
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    Hmm, I would agree with the illusion that GunZ suggested, but I think it is also because the forearms are slightly elongated, which doubled up with the steep stooping really makes it seem that way. To be honest I think he could do with being stooped over a little further, and moving his back end out slightly; at least based on what I observed from some quick Google searching.

    Cool stuff though, I like the colouring and the style and the girls with the two dragon heads on the previous post!

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    I'm an Adult! Member alcoro's Avatar
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    gunz you were right...i extended the legs a bit
    guess it kinda works
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    demon She not he ..guess i should have given her bigger boobs xD

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    I'm an Adult! Member alcoro's Avatar
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    Had been busy with college stuff :/
    it was time i did a one piece fanart
    Nami..fanart ..its a bit messy here and there :/ still a lot to learn


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    The colours are lovely, but I think it would help bring out her profile if you defined the area underneath her nose a bit more. I know you do sometimes see a character's nose just hinted at like that, but I think it's slightly at odds with how realistic the rest of her body is.

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    I agree with the above user about the face being a different style then the rest of the body. The background is you drew really sets the mood well but I feel the outlines you drew around the clouds and railing distract a bit from the beautiful colors. Since this was as you said a "bit messy" I'm sure you noticed some of this yourself. I look forward to seeing more from you.

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    Super Senior Member Demonfyre's Avatar
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    To be honest, I think you could do with removing all the lines and then relying on the values of the painting instead - as pointed out above. The lines and then the nice painting seem to conflict quite heavily, well... at least in my opinion. Really nice painting though, it does generate a really nice atmosphere about it, especially the colour choices and her pose c:

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    I'm an Adult! Member alcoro's Avatar
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    Thanks Guys.
    Yeah am still trying to find a style that suits me.

    This drawing was based on a poem my friend wrote.
    It was quite a challenge but i learnt a lot.

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    As my college has come to an end finally..i will be able to be more active here on mt.:]
    Is there a way to resize your image here? as it tends to blow up to its maximum size when i try to link the da version using the "img" quotes.

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