Vermy's Writing

[TheVermillionFox]

SEE NEWEST POST.

[Prince of Angels]

Not sure if I'm supposed to say anything here, but I'll offer up some help for the Prologue or whatever that top paragraph is. Grammaratical Error #1: But when the royal bloodline is wiped out, the Grim Reaper takes hold of the kingdom, and spreads his dark reign arcoss the lands.
PoA Suggests: But when the royal bloodline is wiped out, the Grim Reaper took controll of the kingdom, and spread his dark reign across the lands. And that's really all I could find. :3 Hope to be of help and sorry if I wasn't supposed to post here...

[TheVermillionFox]

Critique is welcome, but warning, the first chapter is very long.

Thanks for the small crits

[Prince of Angels]

Oh... I thought that meant for the chapters. :3

[TheVermillionFox]

Nah, it's alright. People can do either one.

[TheVermillionFox]

Pretty much a major update; I rewrote them both and started working on another novel as well. I also renamed the two.
Constructive critique is graciously accepted.

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The Rising:

(Formerly The Lost Prophecy.)

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three

Malevolence:

(Formerly Impulse.)

Prologue Part One
Prologue Part Two

Project Angel:

(NO, IT ISN'T A RIP OFF OF MAXIMUM RIDE.)

Chapter One

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I'll stop updating my old threads now.