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Last edited by TheVermillionFox; 03-26-2013 at 04:21 PM.
Not sure if I'm supposed to say anything here, but I'll offer up some help for the Prologue or whatever that top paragraph is. Grammaratical Error #1: But when the royal bloodline is wiped out, the Grim Reaper takes hold of the kingdom, and spreads his dark reign arcoss the lands.
PoA Suggests: But when the royal bloodline is wiped out, the Grim Reaper took controll of the kingdom, and spread his dark reign across the lands. And that's really all I could find. :3 Hope to be of help and sorry if I wasn't supposed to post here...
I am the Prince of Angels, high monarch of the heavens, and I crush all those who stand in my way!
Would you like some pie?
Thanks for the small critsOriginally Posted by TheVermillionFox
Oh... I thought that meant for the chapters. :3
Last edited by Prince of Angels; 08-10-2012 at 09:59 PM.
I am the Prince of Angels, high monarch of the heavens, and I crush all those who stand in my way!
Would you like some pie?
Nah, it's alright. People can do either one.
Pretty much a major update; I rewrote them both and started working on another novel as well. I also renamed the two.
Constructive critique is graciously accepted.
The Rising:
(Formerly The Lost Prophecy.)
Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Malevolence:
(Formerly Impulse.)
Prologue Part One
Prologue Part Two
Project Angel:
(NO, IT ISN'T A RIP OFF OF MAXIMUM RIDE.)
Chapter One
I'll stop updating my old threads now.
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