This piece I tried for like a Victorian era style clothing. I tried the makes the hands like they were holding something but it failed. I feel like I should start shading to give it more depth, but when I do it seems all unevenly shaded. Also this is one of the few times I tried inking, and my lines are not very confident. I tried to make more of creepy smile but however it looks awkward, so I stuck with a simple smile thats why the pose might look weird. This is one of my few attempts as well of trying to put detail on clothing, I also feel like that the cloths look really flat toward the bottom of the dress, my confusion is how to differentiate, details from wrinkles. I also feel that the bottom of the legs look weird as well, but I think that is because I drew the feet in an awkward position.SPOILER! :
Sidenote: One thing that is bothering me quiet a bit for a long time is the face in general, when ever I make the face it never turns out how I would like. I̶ ̶c̶a̶n̶ ̶n̶o̶t̶ ̶t̶e̶l̶l̶ ̶w̶h̶a̶t̶ ̶e̶x̶a̶c̶t̶l̶y̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶b̶o̶t̶h̶e̶r̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶m̶e̶,̶ ̶I̶ ̶d̶o̶ ̶k̶n̶o̶w̶ ̶o̶n̶e̶ ̶t̶h̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶m̶o̶u̶t̶h̶ ̶o̶n̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶3̶/̶4̶ ̶v̶i̶e̶w̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶a̶w̶k̶w̶a̶r̶d̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶m̶e̶ ̶p̶r̶o̶b̶a̶b̶l̶y̶ ̶b̶e̶c̶a̶u̶s̶e̶ ̶I̶ ̶d̶o̶ ̶n̶o̶t̶ ̶k̶n̶o̶w̶ ̶h̶o̶w̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶m̶o̶u̶t̶h̶ ̶c̶h̶a̶n̶g̶e̶s̶ ̶w̶i̶t̶h̶ ̶d̶i̶r̶e̶c̶t̶i̶o̶n̶ ̶e̶s̶p̶e̶c̶i̶a̶l̶l̶y̶ ̶w̶h̶e̶n̶ ̶t̶r̶y̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶d̶e̶p̶i̶c̶t̶ ̶d̶i̶f̶f̶e̶r̶e̶n̶t̶ ̶e̶m̶o̶t̶i̶o̶n̶s̶.̶
I think I have figured out what has been bothering me it mostly is the mouth, and somewhat the eyes. But when I do the mouth it feels like a small difference in width/length/hight makes it seem really off and looks derpy.