Oh an edit, never noticed this before just now. :3
PoA's Notes: Bad Things: Char #1: The eyes look a little too far apart, but that might be just because of the nose. It kind of looks like a dog nose. Which, is probably because of the lighting. The left (her right) hand's knuckles need to be shorter, . :3 Needs some shading on the back of her hair and her left (our right) looks a bit pointy, maybe because it falls OS. Char #2: Hands again. His left (our right) the palm needs to be thinner while the fingers needs thickening. If he's grabbing his hair, I think it might need some creases or something to indicate he's holding his hair.
Good Things: Char #1: The under shirt, turtleneck thing. It goes nice with her outfit over all. That's really it, I do like the whole outfit for her. Good things Char #2: Angel Wings... that means I am his prince. Bow down to me! Again, the outfit is really cool. The colouring is really good too. Good job! And I hope my Criting will do you some good.