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Thread: TVF's Critique Thread Yehaw

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    Question TVF's Critique Thread Yehaw

    First Entry: August 7th, 2012

    Manga style self-portrait, drawn using Chibi Paint.

    Last edited by TheVermillionFox; 06-02-2013 at 09:50 AM.

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    Looks good VF Be careful with the neck, it ends at different levels when it should end on a straight line as the figure is looking straight at us and lastly you have forgotten the whites of the eyes, keep up the good work

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    Actually, I was kind of going for a pose where her head is slightly tilted to the left in a quarter view, but her eyes are facing the viewer. And eye whites make my drawing look weired, but I'll think about it.

    Thanks for the critique!
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    Well in that case I think you should look at some heads and try to make the fact her head is slightly turned a bit more obvious, it looks like she is standing straight towards us. Also remember to shorten the eye further away from the viewer, keep those points in mind and thats most of what there is to fix and your welcome hope this has helped somewhat

    By the way what happened to your old account/thread? o:

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    I don't know...for some reason I couldn't log in to the forums. I don't know if that was fixed now, but too late for that now O3O.

    It doesn't look like it at all, I know T_T. I know how to draw heads, I just don't know how to draw a completed picture.
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    Second Entry: August 8th, 2012

    Unfinished contest entry for MOB Contest Room.

    Last edited by TheVermillionFox; 08-08-2012 at 07:29 AM.
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    I love the idea. But there are two things that stick out to me. The arms are too long (they seem to finish at his knees or below), and the leg that goes off screen is longer and thicker than the other one.

    -scarlet
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    -Victor Hugo

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    Well, the picture is kind of at a quarter view, so the legs are kind of supposed to be at a perspective...? I'm bad with presenting perspective, so it looks stupid.

    Thanks for the crits ^_^
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    I agree with Scarlet, even if it is at quarter view. Also, I think the far thigh should be a little bit longer.

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    Your right about that.
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