wow. this is awesome.

you mean you're doing the battle thing? COOL. i mean this looks epic already. i think it has too many panels in one page... the action scenes 3 and 4 (?) in the middle may look great in bigger frames... effects look really great, i could already feel the action involved from 6 to 10. good job on that.
I also love the texture.

Sketches are amazing by the way. i really like the design of the female with a staff. i love the pose too.
that's all, sorry if not much help...