Many, if not most of you who have looked into publishing your works know the importance of an elevator pitch (a short summary of your story). So let's pitch things to each other and work on improving them. This should make our pitches themselves better, and it'll help solidify the most basic concepts of our stories in our minds and help us focus on them when we feel like writing a big city battle scene inspired by Transformers 7: Crack of the Butt.
Also, when someone asks you what your book/comic/thing is about, you can actually tell them clearly and concisely without meandering around a few different plot points for 15 minutes.
One of mine, for example:
May not be perfect, but it establishes a character and a problem without me bumbling around trying to explain the economic and political implications of the queen's actions, the themes that come through from this or that character, a major side-character's entire arc, etc. Keep it simple and understandable on a basic level, and save the complex sociopolitical commentary for the book/comic/thing itself.A young queen discovers why assassination is considered a natural cause of death for monarchs.
A kid goes to a magical school, becomes a wizard, and fights a powerful evil wizard over the course of 7 years.A young boy learns to control the elements to defeat the evil Fire Lord.A chemistry teacher recently diagnosed with cancer cooks meth to support his family after he's gone.Each of those four stories is so much more than that, but can be summarized in very few words, and you can likely identify every one of them without me telling you the titles. That's the point of an elevator pitch. So let's do it.A boy and his magic dog go on adventures in a post-apocalyptic fantasy world.
To be clear, there should be critiques of some sort here. If someone posts a pitch and it doesn't grab you, see if you can figure out why and tell them.