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    Junior Member Icy's Avatar
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    Hey guys, it's been a while since I posted here. I haven't been drawing a ton, and I can't scan most of the ones I have drawn because I left them when I was in Sweden.

    In any case, I tried to start to look at more anatomical references and using things like the gesture figures Demonfyre mentioned earlier. Before I draw something I make a quick version of it as a gesture on a different sheet to see how the pose I'm imagining looks and to make sure it's logical and not anatomically impossible (as a lot of my drawings have been).
    I haven't scanned the gesture version of the following drawing, but if anyone thinks it will be helpful to see how I transfer from the gesture to actual drawing, I can upload it. Also, I'll try to include any references/tutorials/etc I used when drawing, as it might help to see if I'm applying it correctly.

    I tried incorporating some fabric folds (in the bed), not sure if it got too excessive and messy, that tends to happen a lot

    3/29/14 **somewhat nsfw**
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    References
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    (for the arm-behind-head position)
    http://design.tutsplus.com/tutorials...--vector-11608 (for bed folds)
    also used another random female drawing reference, can't remember the page though :/



    Some things I notice myself:

    -Head is too large, it seems impossible to get this right; it seems fine at first and later, after drawing everything else, it looks too large and it's frustrating to erase a ton to fix it

    -Hips might be not wide enough (not sure about this one)

    -Legs start too high up/torso not long enough compared to rest of body (also speculative, it looks different to me depending on what size I look at it from, in a thumbnail sized image it appears too short, but at regular size I can't notice it. Maybe someone can shed some light on this)

    -I'm not sure if I managed to draw the breasts correctly given the position of her arm; since it is connected to armpit to some extent it seems logical that it would face a bit upward due to the stretching back of the arm. Would be helpful if someone could tell me if I accomplished that

    -Yes, I did not draw the hands because I knew they would be terrible. My next drawing is probably going to be a large practice sheet of hands in different positions so I can stop hiding them like a noob.
    Pushing the limits of how bad drawings can be! If you ever need help, don't ask me. It's probably a bad idea.

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    Junior Member Icy's Avatar
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    Hello. Been a while again. I've got a two-thirds view portrait in pencil, a bit more realistic-style than previous drawings.
    31/8/14
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    Reference



    I feel like the positioning of the headphones is kinda off, like it's too far back to be comfortably on the ear. Additionally, the (his left) shoulder looks kinda awkward, like he's reaching for something behind him? I'm not sure.
    Last edited by Icy; 08-31-2014 at 10:55 PM.
    Pushing the limits of how bad drawings can be! If you ever need help, don't ask me. It's probably a bad idea.

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