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GAH, what are you doing stuff and not commenting on this for, filthy humans!?...
...Alrough 48 pages is kind of alot to go through, I guess. Not all that much seems to happen in the first 20ish pages, either, to be honest, too, but it really picks up after that. :3
The dry eye thing... Just bloody disturbing. Louise continues to be adorable as usual. Really liking the cameos from Suzytype characters, too. The humor was spot-on. Also, really not a big deal, but you forgot to format that border on the upper right of page 20.