Demon: The body's thin, and remember what I said about working on landmarks! The necks also quite long. Try dropping the anime heads as well, dude. You're doing much better however
See that is what I don't understand, I'm measuring the waist out and stuff according to that book and that was the results I got, urgh this makes so little sense >.>' also I have no idea how to draw a normal head :/ thanks for feedback i'll try to fix those areas