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999 Knights Member
Demon: You're doing better
The body is still quite long, but the fact that you're practicing so much will definately help you improve!
Bya: Looks rad. Just gotta say, the angle of the face is off compared to the photo. The kid's head in the photo is a bit more slanted. You colored the lips too dark, as well, and the mouth is too high up. Otherwise you're doing great poopchan
the grayscale idea is great btw
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@Toast - Oh good
thanks for replying and i'll try to stop elongating the torso's :L
Messing about with the proportions and this is the one I find I can work well with, is there anything wrong with them that I should fix?
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Three Trio Tres Member
Yes, knees are way too low and torso is extremely long. Take a look at the pdf that Toast left a link to
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Super Senior Member
Ok was worried that would be the case, i'll go back to that one on the pdf, only problem is when I was using the guidelines the book suggests the results come out looking horrendous :/ i'm not sure what im doing wrong.
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Three Trio Tres Member
Try to follow Loomis as best as you can, post it, and we'll be able to help each other. Not much point to study anatomy if you make it up as you go after all :P
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Super Senior Member
It wasn't really made up, I'll try to find the guide I used on DA tomorrow, too sleepy to concentrate at the moment :L
Tomorrow i'll try again, hopefully they won't turn out like burnt corpses like today... :/
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999 Knights Member
Here's a photo example of loomis' ideal female body drawing, if this helps any
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Thanks again toast, working on the proportions now, it's going ok so far
Last edited by Demonfyre; 06-22-2012 at 08:13 PM.
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I had fun with this but it took waaaay too long. D:
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Demon: The body's thin, and remember what I said about working on landmarks! The necks also quite long. Try dropping the anime heads as well, dude. You're doing much better however
Psi: Looking awesome. All I gotta say is that, her face is a lot softer in the photo, and you seem to have given her a more determined look or something :P Great though, looking forward to more
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